PEER ASSESSMENT

Work stage that's been reviewed:

Feedback from the session before

Prototype work:

-the prototype looks really nice so far, good colour palette and easy to read text

-good hierarchy of text and images

-really good illustration to link with the map

-nice simple icons which are easily understood

Research:

-good research into other methods and wayfindings

-also looked into leaflets and other maps for inspiration

-looked up the on site leaflets, good primary research

Development:

-research has let to some really good ideas

-good sketches to show the layout and composition

-god how you were thinking about how you are going to display the board

Peer Assessment:

Areas of Achievement:

-good ideas and annotations, some good research

-effective use of fonts

-good ideas + annotations

-good digital designs

-lovely sketchbook

-strong digital designs

Areas for Development:
I felt like some of your work went from sketches to finals too quickly
Try using some medias in your sketchbook
-missing development between sketchbook + final designs
-too much empty space
-no experiments with colour
-simple sketch to final design
-experiemtn with more media
-experiment with color
-bridge the gap between the sketchbook + digital, maybe some justified final sketchbook
-no colour experimentation
-analyse the information a little further
-personally not a fan of the yellow